Score: 10

"Flexibility......."

submission: _-={When Madness Descends}=-_

date: July 26, 2008

Wow Maestro.....you've done a lot of musics, even this! As what the title says, your flexibility in creating numerous types of different musics makes you a great composer! Keep up the good work! All of your masterpieces deserves a solid 10/5 from me......no, wait, the whole listeners!

~Sandpenguin....

Score: 10

"Alluring....yet....sad"

submission: March of a Prideless Victory 2

date: June 5, 2008

When I heard this song, it brings me to a battlefield.....which has been continued for months....the soldiers are weary, their leaders are still pressing them hard, but to no avail....but they all know, one day, they will win......or lose, in the hand of the enemy....but something was amiss....I don't know what is it.....

All and all, great composition.....you deserved a 10/10 and 5/5 rating from us! Improve this one....if can....make it longer

Score: 10

"Scary..."

submission: Haunted Waltz

date: March 22, 2008

When I hear this, I first noticed numerous pauses....should be the BGM for castlevania!

Score: 10

"Star Crossed love...."

submission: _-={Corrupted Matrimony}=-_

date: March 19, 2008

A run-away couple attends their long-awaited marriage...in a church far from their home town.....they are wanted becausethe bride-groom is an assassin although the bride doesn't know it.....the story commences...

Deep in the ceremony.....

*Sound of troops marching outside the church*

"God, what maniac has come to defile this place of god?"
*The door of the church was ramped down...*
"Halt there, murderer! You will pay for what have you done to the governor!"
"Dear....what...what is this.....means? No, does this mean that....I...."
"Yes honey, I'm a killer, paid assassin that defies law....but I will protect you my love,"

"Stay there, lady....we won't capture you, we just want to apprehend your husband,"
"No one can touch my wife! I won't let you molest her! This is my job, so that what I do!"
"Foolish, is there no more good jobs that you can work to rather than killing innocent people?"
"No, the governor is a corrupted person! He just craves wealth and popularity rather than his own people!"

*Swords were drawn*

"How dare you mock the governor! Do you know what is the fate of assassins? DIE!"
"But...but honey...you say that you work for money..."
"Yes dear but sometimes.....human feelings and responsibility plays a role...."
"Come on, bonehead! Come kill us if you want!"

He fought the knights with great agility and flexibility.....many knights fell by his sword...until....

*Sound of arrow shot...*

"No, my shoulder!"
"Apprehend him! Try not to kill him!"
"NOOOO DEAR! DON'T DIE....If you ....die....I must join you...."
"No honey...argh....this is my business...I don't want you to get involved..."

When the knights approached him....

*Takes a short knife* "I would rather die in honor as a civilian rather than a mockery of people!" *stab his stomach*

"NOOOO!"
"Stay there, lady....we won't hurt you..."
"You....you all ruin my day....how dull my life is, painful as is...I....*Takes the knife*"
"Stop the lady! Don't let her stab....."
*She slits her throat open......* "Finnnaaa......lllyyy......jo.....in.
.....you"

And that's the end of it, an assassin who fights for justice, but alas, supremacy rules, and the way that he chooses is wrong and finally.....he died at his love's lap.....two bodies mangled.......an example of justice, blind justice....

~Fin

I love the organ play....I'm truly speechless, there's nothing more for me to say...just two thumbs up!

Score: 10

"Loneliness in a heart of a man....."

submission: _-={Constituting Realities}=-_

date: March 19, 2008

When I hear this song, it makes myself feel dull....like something is engulfing me....miasma....ah, clouded visions....I cannot see the future, even a glimpse of it....for me, this song better reflects to a convict who is going to be executed, but I choose to shoot him....quick but painful....

"Give your last prayers....."
"Yes...."
"Are you ready to face this?"
"Yes...."
"Okay, come with me...."

Both of them walked out of the jail.....and the destination will be the last place he would see....

"......." He was blindfolded....
"Okay, where's the shooting squad? Prepare yourself!"
"......*nods*"
"Farewell, my good friend, it's been nice knowing you for the past two years you're in jail, I wish I can help but....sorry,"
"........forgive me...."
*SQUAD! GUN UP! AIM......*
".......FORGGIIIVVEEE MMMMEEEE!!!"
*BANG, BANG, BANG!!"

That's the fate of humans.....sometimes, something pushes a human to do the unthinkable by the norms....and sometimes they pay dearly for it....this is life, if you can't hold the strain, you're ripped......

~Fin.....

Score: 10

"Ah, another classical song.....it makes me cry"

submission: _-={Garden of Memories}=-_

date: March 19, 2008

Sweet melody...the mixture of the flute with the guitar plucks really makes me ponder to my fate in this world....the memory of mine.....what will happen to me next....story time....(Maybe the same like Blood-Raven, but I added more details, with my own story, of course....)

A man sits alone near a calm, flowing river, under a tree....his face looks sad, as he already lose his love, and one by one, the memories with her started to emerge...

"Hmmm....life is short.....why must you leave me so early, Gina? I...I miss you terribly....why can't I join with you...or if can, exchange my life with yours.....I would rather do it for you but.....but....god forbits it to do so....."

He lifted himself up and take a little stroll along the river banks....

"I remember....when we first met here....we were still young at that time, naive....I hope we can chat for a while there, but ah, (Painful memory) I can't.....somebody knocked my head then..."

"I waited for 10 years.....waiting for you after that....although some people said I'm mad, but I believe, we will, be reunited again....be it for a hundred or thousand years, but I will, wait for you...."

"Then, a war broke out....I joined with one side to aid it...for the sake of righteousness's.....but I can't believe that action would unite us again, although it's not as sweet as it was...."

"Then there....I saw you leading a whole army....at first I really didn't recognize you, and we were fighting like hell, all of those....(Another memory) strokes, slices....ah, if I could, I want to...to stop this painful memory....."

"After a while, our Army was victorious, we managed to capture the capital back...and that is the place....the palace....where I know your true identity....the diary of the king.....I...I read it....how rude the king is for haunting his daughter for bringing bad luck and it.....it.....was you. I really shocked when knowing this, and that's why you joined the enemy side....to take your revenge, I stuttered for a while...."

"When I told you in the battle about the truth, you kick me and I stumbled down...I was surrounded when suddenly, an arrow came to hit you, I tried to block it, but the arrow just sliced through my forearm and hit you in the shoulder....it was quick...."

"I vividly remember when we first in love...when I mend your wounds....it was like magic, you see....you're so young at that time, 20 years of age, to join the war...I know our love is a star-crossed love, a forbidden love, forlorn....but I have hope for it,"

"I....I didn't want to recall it all....it's just too heavy for me...no, I can't....somehow, I manage to subdued you down, and using my reputation as a general to support my act....there's a lot of lives I've saved using this.....but I can't be forever with you....why?"

"Soon after the war ended, we got married...that was the happiest day in my life...I wish we can have a great, loving family, and I got it, but it was short, too short...you're bleeding heavily when you're birthing our first child....no, I can't help it...I was helpless....when I saw you in the hangs of life....noooo!!!"

"Although I'm alone in this world, I'll promise to take care our fruit of love....I know, we will, find each other again, and be in a happy family for eternity.....farewell my love, the first and the last......"

~Fin....

Score: 10

"Bewildering, yet have it's own mystery...."

submission: _-={An Endless Desert}=-_*Ext*

date: March 18, 2008

For me, like what other people said, the mood for this song is like in a forest instead of desert, but for a good song like this, any place would be okay, with good mood of course.....story again....

(Taking place in a deep forest, there's a small passage in the middle, with high end trees with think foliage covering the sky...)

"What are we going to do, sir?"
"Hold on....we'll wait for them to come.....prepare your bows...."
"Okay sir, we will commence the ambush when you give the signal,"

They were hiding in the tree branches, his soldiers waited with patience for the enemy to come....but something bothers the leader....he was going to attack a big convoy of troops, with his troops, he just have a 1:10 chance of routing the enemy......it was a suicide mission, but for his country, he will do anything for it...

"Arquebusiers, come with me," With just 50 gunmen, they're creeping in the thick leaves besides the passage.....the rest 50 were hiding on top the trees....
"They've come sir...." Whispered his soldier.....
"Fill in your gun, lads...prepare your swords....we're going to battle to our grave,"
"They're coming closer"
"(Taking his position)*Gasp* This is it....father, mother, I maybe...can't see you anymore....goodbye, click....."

The sound of the first gunpowder shots uproaring the masses of troops....the small army manage to kill nearly half of the army but....everything is just out of their hand in the middle of the battle.....

"No sir, you've been surrounded!Aaahhh! (Fall from a tree)"
"What? No.....shit, is this the end?"
"Nifty trick scoundrel! You think you can beat us?"
"Argh....(Filling in his gun)"
"You doesn't want to surrender?"
"Captain!"
"Sir"
Sound of his comrades yelling can be heard in his ears....but he knows, if he die, he will take threesome or more of the enemy with him.
"Nope, *Shots*"
"Attack that bastard!"
"Come on, I didn't afraid of you! (Pulling his sword)"
"Hahahahahaha!!!!

He knows that this is the last....this is the death pact for him for joining the army, although he will die for sure, but his efforts and contribution will always be remembered....forever.

"No.......our captain.........die.....pull back, pull back......."
That were the last words that he can hear before, his connection with the mortal world ended.....with a pact of iron sword protruding into his chest.......

~Fin.......

Gosh, I'm truly in deep trance while hearing your music sir, really....really fantastic. I will look forward to your future songs.

Score: 10

"Well, another story I guess..."

submission: _-={Subito Crudelo}=-_

date: March 18, 2008

Good song, enchanting voice by Lady Arsenic....truly creepy yet beautiful....for me, it was like a....well, something bad which comes to me, although it was slow, but I know it was coming, creeping......story time again, this song deserves a story of it's own......

A soul was wandering in the voidness....he was running, fast like a stallion....something was chasing him, it was the grim reaper himself....

He ran and ran as fast as he could, but he never have a chance to lose from the eye of the Reaper....he knows that everything that he do in the world were bad, and now, it will come haunting him for eternity.....his legs finally stop...it cannot hold the strain anymore......

"No, please...get away from me, you....you abomination!"
"I've come to take your life....be prepared...."
"I...I have many more business in my life to be done,"
"Done, eh? So what are you doing in the world, S.I.N?"
"No...no.."
"Stop lying, do you think I cannot see the sins that you've done? I think it's better to save your life, for the sake of every living bodies, (Raising scythe)"
"Ah...please....give me another chance to repent...please....no, don't DON'T!"

Then, the soul brings himself up and continue his run, but...

"Puny human, do you think you can escape from me? This is your time, your time to DIE!(Takes a trident and a net then throws it to the unlucky soul)"
"Please.....have mercy on me......PLEASE......"
"Hmph, your judgment has come! (Come floating to the stucked soul)
"Aahhhh.....no.....NOOOOOOOO!"
"(Scythe plunges in)Judgement has been served....."

~Fin

Keep composing good music! I think this will be my radio for life!

Score: 10

"She deserves the song"

submission: _-={For My Lady}=-_

date: March 18, 2008

She deserves the song, as the title says....you're truly gifted at music, sir....I just can think how quick your hand plucking the guitar.....truly, with respect, you're great.

Score: 10

"One of the best songs I heard"

submission: -Glorious morning-

date: March 18, 2008

Good composing, when I hear this song first in Age of War, it just stole my heart right away.... well, story time!

A knight stops for a while, looking to a great prairie in front of him, he knows that it will take a time for him to arrive to his destination, but nevertheless he continues his journey, but just as then, a friend of him came in hurry to accompany him in that long journey, and that is a start of an adventure.......